book review: An Arrow’s Flight by Mark Merlis


AN ARROW’S FLIGHT by Mark Merlis
St. Martin’s Press, 1998

I loved this book, but I’m not really sure who I’d recommend it to. Having some kind of knowledge or passion for Greek mythology seems requisite going in – I can’t imagine getting much enjoyment out of this if you aren’t familiar with the original stories that Merlis is adapting and expounding on and subverting – but this is not your run of the mill Homeric retelling.

You start the novel with Pyrrhus, son of Achilles, and you think you’re going to Troy. That’s how the story goes, anyway – Achilles dies, Pyrrhus takes his place as leader of the Myrmidons, and with the bow of Philoctetes, Pyrrhus takes Troy. Mark Merlis has other plans.

What starts as a (granted, wildly unconventional) retelling of the tale of Pyrrhus quickly morphs into something bigger, via a detour to Sophocoles’ Philoctetes – an allegorical commentary on the AIDS crisis in 1980s America. And it’s just weird enough that it works, beautifully. This is a quietly powerful and unsettling story that starts with the Trojan War and ends up having a lot to say about fate and free will and gay identity.

We’re held at arm’s length from our anti-hero Pyrrhus for the majority of this story. Self-centered, lazy, and apathetic, Pyrrhus is ostensibly difficult to root for. And yet. He gets under your skin, as do all of Merlis’s characters. In that way, this isn’t necessarily an easy book to love. It’s deliberately provocative and graphic, and it shows an ugliness to human nature that isn’t easy to stare in the face. But it’s an even stronger achievement for that, I think. Merlis is able to take this dark and cynical story and infuse it with just enough hope and romance that you’re compelled to see it through to the end – with beautiful payoff once you do.

Merlis’s prose is witty, droll, and surprisingly incisive. It ranges from mildly amusing to positively breathtaking. There were so many lines I had to stop and reread just to take in the full effect. Passages like this:

Did they just not believe it, the Trojans? Or did they believe it the way you believe you’re going to die? With certainty and utter incredulity so perfectly balanced that they fight to a draw, leaving the ignorant animal in you free to get out of bed in the morning.

And this:

The most terrifying thing that could happen to anyone: to have to stand there and hear, from someone who knew everything, the worst you’ve ever thought about yourself.

If you’re looking for a modern but slightly more straightforward Greek mythology retelling, try The Song of Achilles (Madeline Miller) or Ransom (David Malouf) or Alcestis (Katherine Beutner) or Bright Air Black (David Vann). If you’re looking for a powerful gay epic that touches on the AIDS crisis, try Angels in America (Tony Kushner) or The Heart’s Invisible Furies (John Boyne) or Tell the Wolves I’m Home (Carol Rifka Brunt). If your interests are niche enough that you’re looking for a combination, boy do I have some great news for you about An Arrow’s Flight.

7 thoughts on “book review: An Arrow’s Flight by Mark Merlis

  1. YAAAAAAY I’M SO GLAD YOU LOVED IT. I was kind of scared maybe you wouldn’t even though I was very confident you would lol. This is a fantastic review, you really captured how this book leaves no gruesome detail shielded from the reader, and how effective it is. THIS BOOK STILL MAKES ME SAD. The Heart’s Invisible Furies is such a great book to rec alongside this one, because besides the whole AIDS plot they share a similar sense of humor, I think? And like….I actually loved the romance, I could not believe it by the time I got to the end of that book.

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    • omg I know that I was like ‘of course I’ll like it!!’ but having read it now I TOTALLY GET that trepidation hahahaha. This gets filed alongside A Little Life as ‘books I loved that I will probably never tell anyone else to read’ but I AM GLAD WE ARE WILLING TO EMBRACE THE SAME LEVEL OF WEIRDNESS?? Like I was expecting it to be weird but IT WAS….. EVEN WEIRDER? BUT IN A GREAT WAY.

      And YES I was thinking that Merlis’s sense of humor reminded me a lot of Boyne’s!! Omg yes and another thing that THIF and AAF have in common is the romances creeping up on me and ripping my heart out when I least expected it. I’m so sad why do we only ever read sad books

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      • IT’S SUCH A WEIRD BOOK, you and Chelsea are probably the only people I feel safe reccing it to, lol. It’s explicitness is probably the biggest reason I’d feel strange recommending it to someone…like, it’s kinda nasty at parts. BUT IT MAKES IT SO GOOD.

        I think AAF is probably the last book I ever expected to enjoy the romance in while I was reading it….I didn’t even KNOW it would be a romance, but when it started I was like uhhhh and then IT SLOWLY WON ME OVER AND RIPPED OUT MY HEART.

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  2. Great review! This sounds like such an oddly niche book, but one that’s really interesting. I’m definitely looking forward to reading it at some point!

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