GIRL by Edna O’Brien
★☆☆☆☆
FSG, 2019
Girl is a novel which should have been an essay. I think Edna O’Brien’s conviction and passion for the Nigerian women abducted by Boko Haram does shine through – that was the main thing I was worried about when approaching this book. I still remain unconvinced that Edna O’Brien (a white Irish woman) was the right person to tell this story, but I’m somewhat mollified by the fact that she demonstrably did her homework and put quite a lot of research into this endeavor. However, the result, to me, was something that would have worked better as a long-form essay than a fictional book; it felt like the novel’s central conceit was to show the horrors that these girls went through, which did not translate to particularly believable characters or compelling storytelling – I just kept asking myself why I wasn’t seeing a different version of this project as an essay in the New York Times.
One struggle I was not expecting to have with this book was with O’Brien’s prose, but that actually ended up being one of the main issues for me. Structurally it left a lot to be desired; every time a new character was introduced, Maryam’s first-person narration would be interrupted, and we would switch to an italicized segment, also first-person, where the character would narrate their life story for several pages. It felt like the linguistic equivalent of flashbacks – a storytelling convention that I always find lazy.
What was even odder was the disjointed fusion of past and present tense. As a veteran author I want to credit O’Brien with the benefit of the doubt here and say she was trying to achieve something with this, but to me it just felt like the book hadn’t been proofread. Example:
‘They don’t. They can’t.’ She was trembling so badly she had to hold on to a pillar. She refuses a drink of water.
‘I want to be normal,’ she says, the voice urgent.
‘You are normal,’ I say, although I too am jangled.
‘Maybe we can meet up,’ she said and for the first time, she smiled.
‘I am going home, Rebeka.’ I blurted it out, I had to.
‘They will reject you… They will turn you out,’ her voice ugly and spiteful.
‘I have a baby,’ I said, thinking it wiser to tell her.
‘A baby!’ She was aghast. It was all she wanted.
There’s a lot more that didn’t work for me: the pace of the first half of the novel hurtled by at breakneck speed as if it were running through a checklist of every horror imaginable, and the second half slowed to such a standstill all momentum was lost. I felt emotionally numb reading this, which is particularly noteworthy given how graphic it is (trigger warnings for everything imaginable apply). The exploration of trauma only ever felt surface-level; all I ever really learned about Maryam was about her identity as a mother; the more I read the less I understood O’Brien’s aims with this book.
Ultimately well-intentioned but too unfocused to make a huge impact.
If you think you will fare with it better than I did, you can pick up a copy of Girl here on Book Depository.
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Oh how i hate the flashback thing in writing. Especially when it’s formatted with italics, as if that helps the abrupt switch. I am sorry you did not like this one, I am even more wary of it now. I really hope your next read is better! Great review!
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SAME! Flashbacks do not belong in books or movies ever, writers need to come up with more innovative ways to communicate backstory than a giant info-dump. And thank you!
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Yeah, I’d hate this book. I don’t think it’ll make the shortlist so I will probably just skip it. Great review!
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Correct, you would HATE this book.
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That excerpt is almost unreadable! I also strongly dislike novels that only exist to ‘raise awareness’ of a social issue or highlight ‘unheard voices’ – I don’t think it makes for good fiction (blog rant about this coming soon).
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Isn’t it?!?! For SO MANY REASONS but the tense inconsistency was just impossible for my brain to process.
Oh god I am SO excited for that blog post. I could not agree more. So many of these novels would work so much better as nonfiction!
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Omg, we really did feel the same about this one! You’re totally right about the essay thing; just because an author is passionate about a topic, doesn’t mean they should be writing a novel about it. ☕️
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Right?! I still feel weird about the authorship but I do feel like O’Brien justified her own passion for this subject… what she did not justify to me was why this needed to be fictionalized.
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Exactly!
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you are having the WORST women’s prize experience!
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It’s kind of comical at this point isn’t it 😂
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YES every time I see you post a new review, I’m like “oh no not again!”
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😂😂😂
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Ahhhh fuck fuck fuck the excerpt. Bloody hell. So many speech tags. A comma splice?! What happened?!
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ISN’T IT ATROCIOUS
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That excerpt…yikes!!! Based on your review, I suspect I’ll have issues with this one too (but I’ll still try to read it). I’m sorry you’ve been having an underwhelming WP-reading experience so far – hopefully it means you’re saving the most enjoyable books for last!
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I KNOW the excerpt I selected was… particularly bad!!!! Very curious to see what you’ll make of this one. I agree, I think I’m (unintentionally) saving the best for last! At least I hope!
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I am slowing inching closer towards the “remove from TBR” button with every review I read. I sincerely think I’ll hate this book. Great review, it was great for putting my expectations in check!
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Tbh if you don’t have your heart set on reading every single book on the longlist I think you can safely axe this one. That said, its one positive is that it’s VERY short!
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I never really get on with Edna O’Brien so I’m kind of glad I don’t have to read it!
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I’ve only read one of her short stories and I LOVED IT, so this was… a letdown!!!!!
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I am hearing such mixed things about Girl but I do have a copy. I’m not sure I’m going to get along with it…
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I’m really curious to hear your thoughts on this. You’ve enjoyed her in the past right?
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I’ve enjoyed The Country Girls trilogy (posted about the third one today) but I haven’t read anything else by her and certainly nothing recent.
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I completely agree. I thought I was going to love it, and could have left it down half way through…
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I also expected to really enjoy this (I expected that the authorship was the main thing I was going to struggle with) – it was just a major letdown all around.
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Novels that should have been essays are THE WOOOOORST
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AREN’T THEY
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Since my main problem with O’Brien’s other writing was that it was too graphic/violent, I know I won’t read this one. It’s too bad that such a compelling and important story wasn’t told better. Especially since it sounds like O’Brien could have written a great essay about it all!
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Oh yes, sounds like this is certainly not the book for you! I so wish she had decided to present this as nonfiction.
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I have enjoyed reading your longlist reviews, but I seriously hope that things improve for you soon! 🙂
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Sorry, late reply, but thank you! Since then I have 4-starred How We Disappeared which I thought was a fantastic book, and I’m really enjoying Actress at the moment!
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Hmm, I don’t think I was sure about this one even before your review. The subject matter really put me off. I read The Little Red Chairs by Edna O’Brien a few years ago, and there were bits that were quite harrowing. However the checklist of horror and the disjointed nature of the prose really puts me off. I like her as a writer generally but I think I will give this a miss. Great review though.
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I have a copy of Little Red Chairs that I’ve been wanting to get to – I hadn’t known that it was also so graphic! That’s disappointing. I’m ok with graphic violence sometimes but I felt like it never really justified its own inclusion in this book. I feel like she’s an author I could really enjoy, but this was not the right book to start with. I’d definitely encourage you to give it a miss.
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Oh no. I was a bit wary, wondering what connection the author might have with this topic and what she could bring to it, but I was hoping an interest in the subject would help me find something to appreciate with this one. It sounds like there’s a lot not to like though. I think I’ll pick this one up soon to get it out of the way.
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There definitely is not a whole lot to like, unfortunately. I thought that best case scenario I’d love the book and feel conflicted about the authorship question, but that was not the case even a little.
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Ugh, that was my best case scenario hope as well. I think I’ll pick it up after Fleishman just to cross it off the list.
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